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Learning the Life I've learned the people I've met in my life are so valuable and important. Also when I started to talk, I need to care about my words because it can only be forgiven not forgotten. Love, I haven't noticed that I need to be lovable person not loved person who are always seeking for having a nice manner from the partner. I love life and love to learn more about it.

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Felix got pretty much everything, but I have a suggestion for the last line. The sentence you have written makes sense, but I think stylistically that either "I love life and love learning more about it," or "I love life and would love to learn more about it," would be able to get your point across a little better. :)

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Learning the life (OR: Learning how to life OR: Understanding life)

 

I've learned (learned and learnt are both correct) that the people I've met in my life are so very valuable (OR: precious) and important.

 

I have also learned that when I started to talk (OR just when I talk), I need to be careful with about my words because what you say it can only be forgiven but not forgotten.

Regarding love, I haven't (have or haven't ?) noticed that I need to be a lovable person not a loved person who are is always seeking for having a nice good manners from the partner.

I love life and love to learn more about it.

 

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Sorry, it's I have learnt. I have learnt it the hard way that we have to double check our comments before we post them. :)
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I have learned it the hard way. :(
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nice one amanda and you are right :)

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