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First notebook entry: Introducing myself i m victoria.a fashion designer in xiamen. and since i was a kid.my mom let me watched a tv show name "friends" so i falled in love with english.but my english is not so good.i think. i m good at speak english,but when i write.i always forgot how to spell and my grammar is very bad. and i wish i can go to america one day.live there when i older. well.is first time i introduce myself in this way,. so that's it.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i m victoria.a fashion designer in xiamen.
and since i was a kid.my mom let me watched a tv show name "friends"
so i falled in love with english.but my english is not so good.i think.
i m good at speak english,but when i write.i always forgot how to spell and my grammar is very bad.
and i wish i can go to america one day.live there when i older.
well.is first time i introduce myself in this way,.
so that's it.

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I'm Victoria, a...

Since I was a kid, my mom let me watch a TV show named "Friends".

So... with English... English... good, I think.

I'm good at speaking English... I always forget how I should spell the words and...

I... America one day and live there when I'm older.

Well, this is the first time that I...

So...

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i m victoria.a fashion designer in xiamen.
I'm Victoria.  I am a fashion designer in Xiamen.

and since i was a kid.my mom let me watched a tv show name "friends"
Since I was a kid, my mom let me watch a TV show called "Friends".

so i falled in love with english.but my english is not so good.i think.
I fell in love with English.  However, I don't think my English is very good.

i m good at speak english,but when i write.i always forgot how to spell and my grammar is very bad.
I am good at speaking English.  However, when I write, I always forget how to spell and my grammar is very bad.

and i wish i can go to america one day.live there when i older.
I hope that one day I can go to America.  I would like to live there when I am older.

well.is first time i introduce myself in this way,.
This is the first time I have introduced myself in this way.

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