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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hi, name is JPQ, I am learning english because where I live there are a lot of foreign people and I want to make them my friends. I speak Spanish, because here it's the local language. I like to go swimming and the sea.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, my name is JPQ, I am learning english English because where I live there are a lot of foreign people foreigners and I want to befriend them make them my friends.
I speak Spanish, because here it's the local language here.
I like to go swimming and the sea.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, my name is JPQ. I am learning English because there are a lot of foreigners where I live and I want to become friends with them.
I speak Spanish because it's the local language here.

I like to go swimming and I enjoy the sea.

I think Christopher had the best correction, as mine is more casual. You don't need to use a comma before "because" so I removed it. Also the term "foreign people" sounds a bit odd and slightly offensive, so probably best to avoid it. I added the phrase before "the sea" because it sounded as if it was missing something. You could also have written: "I like the sea and going swimming", "I like to going swimming in the ocean" or "I like looking at the ocean and swimming" etc.

Welcome and I wish you well with your language journey!
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, name is JPQ. I am learning English because where I live there are a lot of foreign people, and I want to make them my friends.
I speak Spanish, because here it's the local language.
I like to go swimming in the sea.

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Hi, mi name is JPQ. I am learning English because there are lots of foreign people in the place where I live, and I want to make them my friends. 

I speake Spanish, because here it's the local language.

I like to go swimming in the sea.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, name is JPQ,. I am learning eEnglish because where I live there are a lot of foreign people, and I want to make them my friends.
I speak Spanish, because here it's the local language.
I like to go swimming and in the sea.

 

Muy bien.  Continuar practicar!

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