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what is love? Today,I want to talk about something about love in this topic.Most of women I know share the same idears that their boyfriends must attach more importance on them,and do their utmost to care for them,Women in love are eager for their lovers's caring and loyalty.One of my friends tells me that her boyfriend always submit to her and do everythings what my friends ask for.She is content with the excellent behaviour and insists on the undoubtable reality that her boyfriend is her true lover .If you think so ,I must point out that this man is too poor to afford a house today, But my friend ,Howerer, is far more rich than him .Another gap between this lovers is that my friend's diploma is higher than this man,With giving some consideration to the conventional principles setted by the society that man cant marry to his lover unless he owns a house ,evermore,a car.I am spending too much time on listing these so-called limits in order to wonder one thing ,to be frankly,Could the fantastic aspect in front of my friends be just a fair tale,I have to wonder the man would treat my friend as the most precious one in his whole life or act a gaint reverse plot. Their love story is going on,To some sense,I should give her my wishes and blessings ,Due to my passive mind on love that I am afraid of love,even more worse ,I dont believe one could love one forever ,I cant help suspecting the ture feelings this man to my dear friend.

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Well, since it seems that your friend is unpleasant and very demanding, she must have a lower status boyfriend (a guy who is poorer and less educated). He is desperate for a woman so he tolerates her behavior. A higher status man would have more choices and would want a better behaved girl.
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A few grammar mistakes that I did not correct, otherwise fine. Regarding love--bottom line, do they get along well and can they be best friends for the rest of their life? Having money is practical, but there are many that have all the material possessions they desire, but have not love, they have nothing and end up miserably wealthy. Some begin to hate each other and soon begin fighting. Some will fight to the point of death.
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what is love?

Today,I want to talk about something about love in this topic.Most of women I know share the same idears that their boyfriends must attach more importance on them,and do their utmost to care for them,Women in love are eager for their lovers's caring and loyalty.One of my friends tells me that her boyfriend always submit to her and do everythings what my friends ask for.She is content with the excellent behaviour and insists on the undoubtable reality that her boyfriend is her true lover .If you think so ,I must point out that this man is too poor to afford a house today, But my friend ,Howerer, is far more rich than him .Another gap between this lovers is that my friend's diploma is higher than this man,With giving some consideration to the conventional principles setted by the society that man cant marry to his lover unless he owns a house ,evermore,a car.I am spending too much time on listing these so-called limits in order to wonder one thing ,to be frankly,Could the fantastic aspect in front of my friends be just a fairy tale,I have to wonder the man would treat my friend as the most precious one in his whole life or act a gaint reverse plot.
Their love story is going on,To some sense,I should give her my wishes and blessings ,Due to my passive mind on love that I am afraid of love,even more worse ,I dont believe one could love one forever ,I cant help suspecting the ture feelings this man to my dear friend.

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[email protected] Hello My name is jessica i saw your profile today at(italki.com)and became interested in you i will also like to know you the more and i want you to send a mail to my email address so i can give you my picture for you to know whom l am.Here is my email address([email protected]).I believe we can move from here.I am waiting for your mail to my email address above.jessica.(Remember the distance or colour does not matter but love matters alot in life) Please reply me with my email address here ([email protected])
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Corrections: "I can't help suspecting the true feeling this man has towards my dear friend".

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