An unforgettable experience

Yesterday, I went shopping with my friends. I thought we would have a good time. Because our school is far from the center of the city, so we seldom went go out. We were all excited. I wore my high heels to go shopping not instead of my favourite sports shoes. It was very uncomfortable. I was not accustomed to wearing high heels and my feet had two big blisters. Now I am learning how to wear high heels comfortably.

Make sure you remember to put spaces after commas and periods. If you use 'because' at the beginning of the sentence, you don't need to use 'so' as well. Progressive tense is tricky, but I think more fitting for this sentence.

Excellent job! I am trying to get used to wearing high heels, too. I love them, but they can be such a pain. :P