My dream

I don't know why that I every so often admire others, especially my classmates, that study abroad. It is impossible to make more than the wildest guess at my passionate dream to act like them, but that is not the case at all. Without giving more consideration to the ability to afford it, it is also not cinch for me to pass the IELTS examination. I am not professional and I should spend on the order of half a day on classes in my major courses. However, I have a strong devotion to learn English well, to enbrace such an intersting and colourful world outside. I should make it clear that what do I really want to do. I should gear up for taking challenges far more than steering clear of obstacles lying in front of me. At least it seems to me, with the increasing development of the society, what we should do is to do our utmost to merge into the international atmosphere. Hello, everyone, Jessica is coming someday.

[Good work.  Good luck in achieving your goals.]

My dream

I don't know why I ever so often admire others, especially my classmates who study aboard.It is impossible to make more than a wild guess at my passionate dream to act like them, but it is not the case at all (I feel the bit after the comma does not address any subject before it).Without taking into consideration the ability to afford such a thing, it is also not cinch (I applaud the use of this word) for me to pass the IELTS exam. I am not professional (in...) and I spend half a day on having my major courses. However, I am devoted to learning English well. In order to/ If I wish to/ So, to embrace such an interesting and colourful world outside, I must decide on / must be clear in deciding on what I really want to do. I should gear up into taking more challenges, far more than steering clear off obstacles lying in front of me. It seems to me that with the increasing development of society, what we should do is do our best to merge into the international atmosphere. Hello,everyone. Jessica is coming one of these days.

       Tis a wonderful goal that you have set out for yourself. Work hard, and stay focused. 

       Best wishes,

       L