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TOUCH.TOUCH.TOUCH The video 'TOUCH' I have see this morning.It's about a little boy have a great mind ,perhaps it's about special boy with his dad's story.In youku website,some of the user said,it just like The Butterfly Effect。I guess so.Same of them said,it's boring,the long long story,it's a line.maybe makes it be a movie would be exciting.So ,Have been you see it .Told me how was it.

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TOUCH.TOUCH.TOUCH

I have seen The a video called 'TOUCH' I have see this morning.It's about a little boy who have has a great mind ,perhaps it's a story from a father perspective about a special boy with his dad's story.In On a youku website,some of the users said, "It's just like The Butterfly Effect. "。I guess so.Some of them said, "It's boring, it has a very long story line the long long story,it's a line ".Maybe it would makes it be the a movie would be more exciting.So, Have been you seen it ? Told Tell me how was it  about it.

 

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