Todays events...10.10.2012
Today was such a chilly and sprinkling day. It felt great because I really don't like hot weather much, so it felt nice to be in the cold rain.
That was the only good part of my day...the rest was bad...classes all day, homework and studying filling the gaps between classes...aghh
I have no life... TT.TT
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Today's events...10.10.2012 << the events belong to today so you need an apostrophe
Today was such a chilly and sprinkling drizzly day (water can sprinkle, but a day cannot). It felt great because I really don't like hot weather very much, so it felt nice to be in the cold rain.
That was the only good part of my day, the rest was bad; classes all day, homework and studying filling the gaps between classes...aghh
I have no life... TT.TT
Great entry, just a few tiny corrections :)
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Todays events...10.10.2012
Today was such a chilly and sprinkling day. It felt great because I really don't like hot weather that much, so it felt nice to be in the cold rain.
That was the only good part of my day...the rest of it was bad...classes all day, homework and studying, filling the gaps between classes...aghh
I have no life... TT.TT
Dobro ti ide :D
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