The difference between Chinese education and Western education

　　 Western parents suppose that they should offer children opportunities to develop themselves, discovering their potential specialties and abilities. encourage children to study with interest and pleasure, doing what they want to do and trying their best, they can more be more aggressive in personal development, they become the master of their own destiny. They are more ingenious and creative.

But,i   In China, it's very different, China has a large population, and it’s a big problem for a young people to find a satisfying job. Facing such a competitive situation, Chinese parents focus more on how to make their child absorb all kinds of knowledge. How can they make their child get higher scores. There is no doubt that they suppose that learning by cramming is the fastest way for their child to learn more knowledge although the learning process was very painful. Finally, most of Chinese students both become exam-machines or exam-experts.

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