You have a good sense of speaking English, you will make yourself understood, nice start!!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am very surprised i can learn english in this way, thanks for the teacher who will help me in advance. [do you mean you have a teacher and you want to thank that teacher or do you mean you want a teacher? ]
Now, I would like to introduce myself to you. My name is Grace. I have given myself this English name. I like learning English. I want to communicate with foreigners fluently. However, as i work in cCina and i hardly have any chance to  talk with foreigner, I am afraid i will fail. I heard about this website from my friends. I think this is a good way to learn English. I hope i can improve my English as quickly as possible. Thank you!!

Xiexie ni!