Assignment004Describe a book that you think is the most useful and explain why it is the most useful
I believe the book who influenced me most was called HOW TO BE A GOOD FRIEND.
What affected me most was its comprehension of warmheartedness. Before I have read this book, I was kindhearteded but not warmhearted. However, this book really helps me to express my kindness to my friend effectively.
On the other hand, its emphasis on trust also influenced me a lot. Before I have read this book, I was an individualist and I only trust in myself. However, it is this book which makes me believe that trust in a friend is essetial to be a good friend.
【PS: I write the composition by using a template, so I wanna to learn various ways to express. Could u plz not only just help me with my spelling, but also teach me more native and various expressions? Thank you very much!】
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Assignment004Describe a book that you think is the most useful and explain why it is the most useful
I believe t The book who that influenced me the most was is called HOW TO BE A GOOD FRIEND How to Be a Good Friend.
What affected me the most was its (do you mean the author's comprehension? A book cannot comprehend.) comprehension of warmheartedness. Before I have read this book, I feel that I was kindhearteded but not warmhearted. However, this book has really helped me to express my kindness to my friends more effectively.
On the other hand (you are not talking about an opposite idea- try to use something with a similar meaning to "furthermore"), its emphasis on trust also influenced me a lot. Before I have read this book, I was an individualist and I only trusted myself. However, it is this book which makes me believe that trust in a friend is essential to being a good friend.
【PS: I write the composition by using a template, so I wanna to learn various ways to express. Could u plz not only just help me with my spelling, but also teach me more native and various expressions? Thank you very much!】
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