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The mid-autumn festival ended today and I returned to the university dormitory where I am staying. I helped my mom cook Chinese food and washed the dishes. I feel I must do these because a man's duty is not only in making money but also in helping out with the household chores. Therefore, I think I will be a good husband. I will try my best to look after my future wife.

today。

the mid-autumn was end .and i came back to my university today.i am staying at dormitory now.i help my mom cook chinese food and wash the dishes,i think i must do it.because the making money is man's duty and cook food and wash dish also is man's duty.so i think i will be a better husband.i try my best to look after my future wife.thanks for everyone modificate my composition.

today。

the mid-autumn has ended .and i came back to my university today.i am staying at the dormitory now.i help my mom cook chinese food and wash the dishes,i think i must do it.because making money is a man's duty and to cook food and wash dishes also are man's duty.so i think i will be a better husband.i try my best to look after my future wife.thanks everyone for modifying my composition.