First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i'm learning English,because i want to study and work in Iran and make friends from diffrent countries such as the US (New York is a city),Canada, Australia and some European countries 
my native language is Persian, and i grew up in Iran
i enjoy swimming,reading novels, watching movies,and sports

Hello !

I think Persian is a beautiful language.

I hope you can make many friends here : )

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i'm learning English,because i want to study and work in Iran and make friend from diffrent country as newyork,kanada,american country and europe country,australian
my native language is pertion, and i grow up in Iran
i enjoy swimming,reading novel, watching movies,and sports

Hi,

countries (more than one), are: America, Canada and European countries.  Australia.  We capitalize the first letter of country names.

New York is a city and is also a state in the US.  We use past tense: I grew up in Iran.  You also want to say you want to make friends, more than one I am sure.

Milton

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

i'm learning English,because i want to study and work in Iran and make friend from diffrent country as newyork,kanada,american country and europe country,australian
my native language is pertion, and i grow up in Iran
i enjoy swimming,reading novel, watching movies,and sports

My native language is Persian and I grew up in Iran.

Welcome, and good luck with your English :-)