A perfect man

I just listened to the album of David Garrett again, I find that I can never get tired of listening to his works. He's so talented: he's got the skill, the passion, the style and even the look! This man rules! He combines classical music and pop music perfectly. I highly recommend his albums to all you music lovers; you'll be amazed I guarantee! I really can't use words to express my love for him. Listen to his works, it's really a kind of enjoyment and deeply moved you and you will be deeply moved. He uses four strings to plays the world's most fabulous tunes. His hands attract tease out the most fair-sounding musical notes. You have to got lie down to listen respectfully the melody he plays fully appreciate his melodies. It sounds like the sound music of heaven. He is a genius!

In all of Of all his works, the one I like most is "He's a Pirate" which is the theme song of "Pirates of the Caribbean" most. Passion, desire, and the extension of the senses, everything about it makes my blood boil lights my fire.

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That was really well written, Carolyn! I just had a listen to the song you mentioned and it made me think of a Rodrigo y Gabriela album I have, so I'm listening to that now :-)

"To make someone's blood boil" means to make someone angry. "To light someone's fire" means to get someone excited or passionate about something.

Wasn't sure you wanted to say in grey-highlighted part. And I took a guess that you meant "You have to lie down..." later in the text.

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A perfect man

I just listened to the album of David Garrett again. I find that I can never get tired of listening to his works. He's so talented, he's got the skill, the passion, the style and even the look! This man rules! He combines classical music and pop music perfectly. I highly recommend his albums to all you music lovers, you'll be amazed I guarantee it! I really can't use words to express my love for him. Listening to his works, it's really a kind of enjoyment and deeply moving. He uses four strings to play the world's most fabulous tunes. His hands play out the most fair-sounding musical notes. You have to lie down to listen respectfully to the melody he plays. It sounds like the sound of heaven. He is a genius! 

Of all of his works, I like "He's a Pirate," most, which is the theme song of "Pirates of the Caribbean." Passion, desireand the extension of the senses, everything touches me.

This is very well written!