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The weekend is here
Today is Friday, I wished waited for this moment since Monday. After a strong busy week doing some of interviews and looking for a job, I am going to go out tonight this nigth with friends.
First we use to will meet in at a restaurant bar in "plaza de España" there we take have dinner and we eat a lot "tapas". We know to the restaurant ower and he sometimes invites us some times to take wines and "sidra" "cider" (tipical drink from Asturias, a region in the north of Spain).
After we use to will walk in on Gran Vía street and we go to Puerta del sol, where there is a place in the centre where there is with a lot pubs and discos.
There we use to go to an Irish pub that is very good well. There is are a lot people and it is a very good place to practice languages because there is are a lot foreign people, a lot of erasmus students.
After which we go to a tecno disco in Gran Vía to dance. This disco closes late and is open until 7 or 8 a.m. and after, if I will be tire am tired I will come back home but before I will take have "chocolate con churros" a tipical madrileñan breakfast. jejeje (hehehe!)
this is any night in Madrid. I will miss it if I go to work. out
Wow, that sounds like a very busy weekend!
A few suggestions:
You need to put a capital as the first letter of a word that starts a sentence, for place names, days of the week (month etc).
If you are looking forward to Friday (ever since Monday), you don't say that you "wished" for it, because you know Friday is certain to come, instead you say that you "waited for it" (which implies a level of impatience with waiting for Friday).
(I wait for Friday to come first thing Monday morning!).
When it comes to eating, you say that you "have dinner", or you "had dinner".
"Take" means you have removed something, maybe you took your wallet from home for example. (took is the past tense of take).
Good & Well are a bit different in English.
Good is something you like (it was good food), "well" is how someone feels, but it isn't strong, you might say it after having been sick (I was sick yesterday, but I feel well today).
I was unsure about one set of corrections I did.
Many times you said "use to" which I thought you meant "used to".
But "used to" means something you did often in the past, but not anymore.
Your post started out by saying "I am going to go out", which is talking about something you plan to do in the future (the future being later that night in this case).
This is why I changed everything to a future tense "we will go to".
I hope your breakfast of Churros with chocolate didn't make you sick! :)
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