The tower is located in my hand^_<
Today my mother my grandpa my aunt and I go to the park,there have a tower,,I like take photo,so I take it in my hand,,haha :D :D
My grandpa boast me very smart :))but my mother said me naughty :((
I think take this photo is very interesting:P
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The tower is located in my hand^_<
Today my mother, my grandpa, my aunt and I go (went) to the park.(At the park,)there have (is) a tower,,(You don't need two commas. Use one or finish the sentence.)I like take photos,so I take it in my hand (took the photo as if it was in my hand.),,haha :D :D
My grandpa boasts (that I am)me very smart :)) But my mother said (that I am) me naughty. :((
I think take (taking) this photo is (was) very interesting. :P
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The tower is located in my hand^_<
Today my mother, my grandpa, my aunt and me went to a park. There was a tower there. I liked it so I took a photo of it on my hand, haha. :D :D
My grandpa (boast) acknowledge me of being very smart :))but my mother said that I am naughty. :((
I think that this photo is very interesting. :P
Your photo is very interesting indeed. Good luck.
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@Maddie S. :D Thank you~
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@Hannah: I think it's interesting too :D thanks dear :)))
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Oh, that's very interesting!
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