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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hi,everybody.My english name is Lily. Coming this place,because I want to make friends with differnt countries people and study language. Chinese is my nature language and I can speak english too .But I still want to stuy Japanese. Oh, I forget to say I am a accountant. Welcome my friends!

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi everybody. My english name is Lily. I've come to this place Coming this place, because I want to make friends with people from different countries people and study languages. Chinese is my nature native language and I can speak english too. But I still also want to study Japanese. Oh, I forget to say mention I am an accountant.

Welcome my friends!

 

Hihi! Welcome.

 

You need a space after each punctuation mark, be it a full stop or comma.

It is not "a" accountant, because accountant starts with a vowel sound, you need to use "an".

examples - A person. A rabbit. A tiger.A boy. A girl.

An elephant. An apple. An unspeakable act. An idiot. An office.

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