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What happened to me today.
As usual, today I got up at 6:15am and went to the gym. My workout included; warming up, biceps, chest, abdominal exercises and stretching in a intense way. Afterwards, I shaved and had a shower.
Then I came back home in order to tidy up and have breakfast. I arrived at the office at 8:30am, working until 17:30pm, with an hour's break for lunch. Later, I attended my French class from 18:00 to 19:15.
Also I also attended to my oral English class and finally I came home.
I had supper and now I am writing about my stressful day. I would be pleased if somebody corrected my essay, but I'd rather to speak with somebody by skype instead of writing. Thanks
What has happened to me today
As usual, today I got up at 6:15 and I went gone to the gym. My workout has been warming up, biceps, breast, abdominals, and stretching in an intense way. Then I shave and shower. Then I came back home in order to tidy it up and have a breakfast. I arrived at the office at 8:30 until 17:30, with an hour break for lunch. Then I attended my french class from 18:00 to 19:15. Then I also attended my english speaking face to face class and finally I came back home, I have had supper and I am writing my stressing day. I would be pleased if somebody will correct my essay but I'd rather speak with somebody by skype instead of writing. Thanks
Hi, I changed some of your verb forms, for example, "have arrived" generally means that you have arrived sometime before in the past. Since these things happened once, today, you would use the simple past tense, such as "I went, I came"
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