First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning the English language, because I want to work and make friends from other countries. My native language is Russian.

The other correction was correct for the most part. There was an "s" after "make" but that was probably a typo.

I am learning English because I want to work in other countries and makes friends in other countries. My native language is Russian.

"countries", instead of 'country', because it is plural. 

repeat 'other', in front of 'countries' both times, otherwise it sounds like you are saying  you want to makes friends in the country. The country, as opposed to the city.

'because' does not need a comma in front of it, but really it is preference. 

'Russian', instead of 'Russia'. Russia is where you live, and Russian is what you speak.

Я надеюсь, что это помогает ))