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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hi firends,my name is Angela.I was borned in Fujian Porvince.When I was 6 years old I moved to Hainan Porvince with my parents.So,I am a half Hainan people.I will go to colleage on october.I love my colleage,it called Henan finance and economics,politics and law University in Henan Zhengzhou.Next month I will go to college.I will miss all of my life in Hainan.This is the first time I left home.I won't let it go.But this is my life time begin.I will do my best to face my new life.I am not outgoing but not shy.I need to practice myself.Hope I could make friends with everyone of you.And this is me,poor english,but enthusiastic of english.Thanks.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi firends friends, my name is Angela. I was borned in Fujian Province. When I was 6 years old, I moved with my parents to Hainan Province with my parents.So, I am a half-Hainan people person. I will go to colleage on in October. I love my colleage, it is called Henan Finance and Economics, politics and Law Henan University in Henan, Zhengzhou. Next month, I will go to college courses will start. I will miss all of my life in Hainan.This is the first time I left leave my home. I won't let it go. But this that is the beginning of my life time begin.I will do my best to face my new life.
I am not outgoing but not shy. I need to practice myself. I hope I can be friends with everyone all of you.
And this is me, a poor english speaker, but I am enthusiastic of english to learn and improve it.
Thanks.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi friends! My name is Angela. I was borned in Fujian Province.  When I was 6 years old, I moved to Hainan Province with my parents. Therefore, I am a half Hainan people. I will go to colleage in October. I love my colleage.  It is called Henan finance and economics, politics and law University in Henan Zhengzhou.  Next month I will go to college. I will miss all of my life in Hainan.  This is the first time I left will leave home.  I won't let it go.  But this is my life time begin. I don't want to leave, but this is when my new life will begin.     I will do my best to face adapt to my new life.  I am not very outgoing, but not completely shy either.  I need to practice improve myself.  Hope I could I hope to make friends with everyone each of you.  Well, this is me in a nutshell -- poor english,but enthusiastic of about learning English. Thanks.

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Hi Angela.  Not bad for a first notebook entry!  I made some quick corrections.  I hope they will be helpful to you.  Oh, also remember there is a difference in punctuation in Chinese and in English.  In English,  after a period (.) there needs to be TWO spaces before starting a new sentence.  In Chinese, no space is required after the period (。)  .

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi friends,my name is Angela.I was born in Fujian Porvince.When I was 6 years old and I moved to Hainan Porvince with my parents.So I am a half Hainan people.I will go to college on in October.I love my college ,it is called Henan Finance and Economics,Politics and Law University in Henan Zhengzhou. Next month I will go to college.I will miss all of my life in Hainan.This is the first time I have left home.I will never forget my home won't let it go.But this is the time for my life to startthis is my life time begin.I will do my best to in dealing with face my new life.I am not outgoing ,but I am not shy.I need to practice myself.I hope to make friends with everyone of you ,and this is me, I have bad english,but I am enthusiastic of learning English.Thanks.

你的英文好了如果你练习些英文，就你的英文改善。

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