First Notebook Entry: Introducing Myself

     First I want to say hello to someone who will check this article. Nice to seeyou.
I’m a college student and have passed the CET4 (Chinese English Test 4); that means I'm not a poor guy at English.

    I will study abroad when I graduate, so I need to practice my spokenEnglish. Also, I want to make friends with someone who speaks English. 
My hobby is taking photos, sports, dancing, watching movies, reading, painting and so on.

     My native language is Chinese and I'm very good at it, so I can teach you if you want. I'm looking forward someone's early reply.

那么多爱好，不错。顶你一下！

First Notebook entry: Introducing Myself

First i want to say hello to someone who will check this article, nice to see you.
I am a college student and have passed the CET4 (Chinese english test four) That means i am not a poor english speaker.
I will study abroad when i graduate so i need to practice my spoken english. I want to make friends with someone who speaks english.
my hobby is take photographs, play different sports, dancing, movies. reading, painting and so on. 
My native language is (Mandarin) Chinese, I am a very good teacher. 
I am looking forward to someone's reply.

You are not only very good in Mandarin; your English is good as well. You should have no problem when you visit the states. Since you are learning the language I would stay away from things like smileys. I capitalized every word in your title as for most words (except "and" "the" and similar words) that is how titles are treated. The first word of every sentence is capitalized. you is the proper for of "u" in English haven't said that in informal online forums such as this Americans use "u" as well, but an English professor will not like it. One thing in English it is important whether something has happened already or will happen in how we say it, i.e spoke, speak, spoken. I thought you did a great job of introducing yourself!

--John

First Notebook Entry: Introducing Myself

     First I want to say hello to someone who will check this article. Nice to see you.
I’m a college student and have passed the CET4 (Chinese English Test 4); that means I'm not a poor guy at English.

    I will study abroad when I graduate, so I need to practice my spoken English. Also, I want to make friends with someone who speaks English.
My hobby is taking photos, sports, dancing, watching movies, reading, painting and so on.

     My native language is Chinese and I'm very good at it, so I can teach you if you want. I'm looking forward someone's early reply.

那么多爱好，不错。顶你一下！