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Fair in my town
Over the next few days, a fair is being celebrated in my town. In general people are glad because it is the biggest festival that takes place in my town, everyone finishes work early to spend time with their families and friends.
Here there is a enormous fairground that lasts for five days and people go to it twice per day.
The first one time is during lunch-time or in the afternoon, especially middle aged people, they go to the fair for lunch or to have a drink with friends.
At this time riders with his horses also go to the fairground, the Spanish word for those people is "Caballistas" and they take a walk by the streets and around the fair, also at this time there are a lot of carriages pulled by horses. People in these carriages wear traditional Andalusian dresses.
The second period is in the evening when it is getting dark. Then all people, old and young go out to enjoy with the attractions of the fair. But also to meet to friends, to dance, and to go to a music concert.
Other important time at the fair is when the British tea time, at five o'clock in the afternoon. Every day is celebrated with a bullfight in the bullring.
Personally I don't like this bullfights because it is a cruel act where an animal is hurt and it suffers to death only for the entertainment of a few people. But is very traditional but I think things are going to change in the future regarding this.
Great story Dani, it makes me want to come to Andalucia, but I think you are having a lot of rain at the moment.
Fair in my town
This These days, a fair is being celebrated in my town. In general people is sre glad in this days of feast because it is the most great best festival in my town. then Everyone let to leaves their work and change his tools, his computers and his cars and lorries for a to spend time that spend with his their families and friends.
Here there is a enormous fairground and for five days and people go to it twice per day.
The first one time is in the during lunch-time or in the afternoon, especilly people in mid age, they go to the fair to for lunch or to have a drink with friends.
At this time riders with his horses also go to the fairground, the Spanish word for this these people is "Caballistas" and they take a walk by the streets around the fair, also at this time there are a lot of carriages pulled by horses. People on these carriages wear traditional Andalusian dresses.
The second period is in the evening when it is getting dark. Then all people, old and young go out to enjoy with the attraction in the fair. But also to meet to friends, to dance, and to go to some a music concert.
Another important time in the fair is when the British tea time , the at five o'clock in the afternoon. here Every day is celebrated there is a bullfight in the bullring.
Personally I don't like this bullfights because it is a cruel act where a animal is hurt and it they suffer to death only to for the entertainment of a few people. But is very traditional. but I think things are going to change in the future about this subject.
Dani I corrected really quickly as I'm leaving for work. Hope you get some better ideas!
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