I am working in my office but the thunders is blasting out side,which remainds me that there will be another big rain. Unfortunately, I did not bring the umbrella and rain coat and more nuisance thing is that I rode a bike to get to work this more.

I hope there will not be another big traffic jam in beijing. Just two days ago , many beijingers sufferred a terrible traffic congestion.All the cars and buses got stuck.Roads are not roads,which make Beijing really like a huge parking area.

I hate the traffic jam and hate the feeling that idol my time just in the cabinet to wait for the little move. I alway ask why the issue of congestion in beijing is so serious and why it is so diffucult to tackle.It is so bad that people of china call Beijing which is the capital of China another new name,the capital of traffic jam.

Beijing is such a huge city with 200 million people,even more popolation than some countries in this world. The booming of the popluation directly result in the lack of room for living and transportation,becasue the speed of the city growing will never catch the speed of population growing. 200 million people have 5 million cars running in this city. Too many cars, so few roads and slow development of public construction including bus line and sub way is one of the reasons of congestion. Another reason is that beijing has more reckless drivers than any city of this world. The fast pace of life in this mordern society makes very one's life very stressful.Office workers will be fined,if they arrive late,so they will be very anygry when they we were stuck in the congestion. Sometime fighing and traffic accident will happen very frequently. People even do not have a good understanding of the trafic regulation and a good sense for driveing in polite manner.These will make the traffic problem even more serious. Thirdly, community such as the companies and shcools do not organise the needs of commuting successgully.Parents have to send their children to shcool by car by themslves and office worker have to go to work by themselves. This unorganised needs of transportaion add more unnecessary presure to the traffic jam. If they can be managed very well,by means such as using the school and working bus more extensively or staggering the time of go-to work and get-off work of different business, the traffic jam will have less presure.

All in all,there are many seasons of the problem. So government should face up more of their responsiblilities to make our lives better.

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There will be a big rain out side. (It is raining heavily outside.)

I am working in my office but the thunder is blasting outside,which reminds me that outside it is still raining heavily . Unfortunately, I did not bring an umbrella or rain coat and the most terrible nuisance is that I rode a bike to get to work this morning.

I hope there will not be another big traffic jam in Beijing. Just two days ago , many Beijingers sufferred  terrible traffic condestion.All the cars and buses were got stuck in traffic. All of Beijing became like a huge parking area.

I hate traffic jams and hate the feeling that I am waisting my time while waiting for every little movement. I alway ask why the issue of congestion in Neijing is so serious and why it is so diffucult to tackle.It is so bad that people of China call Beijing which is the capital of China another new name,the capital of traffic jams.

Beijing is such a huge city with 200 million people, it even has a higher population than some countries in this world. The booming population directly results in the lack of room for living and transportation,because the city's infrastructure will never catch up with the speed of population growth 200 million people have 5 million cars running in this city. Too many cars and so few roads and the slow development of public transportation including a bus line and subway is one of the reasons for the congestion. Another reason is that Beijing has more reckless drivers than any other city in this world. The fast pace of life in this modern society makes one's life very stressful.Office workers will be fined,if they arrive late,so they are really angry when they are stuck in the congestion. Sometimes fighting and traffic accidents will happen very frequently. People do not even have a good understanding of the traffic regulations or the ability to drive a in polite manner. These things make the traffic problem even more serious. Thirdly, the community including companies and schools do not organize  for the needs of Beijing. It makes commuting more difficult. Parents have to send their children to school by car themselves and office worker have to go to work on their own. This lack of organization adds more unnecessary presure to the traffic jam. If the roads can be managed better, for example by using school and work buses more extensively or staggering the time of when workers have to go to work and get-off work, the roads will be under less pressure.

All in all,there are many ways to solve the problem. So the government should face up to their responsiblility.