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First notebook entry: Introducing myself My native language is Chinese, and I grew up in China. I am learning English because I want to go sightseeing abroad someday when i graduate.

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Where do you wanna go to sightsee?
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My native language is Chinese, and I grew have grown up in China.
I am learning English because I want to go sightseeing abroad someday when i I'm graduate.

1. "," is not required before "and".

2. If you use "grew(past indefinite)", it means that now you are not in china. That's why it would be "have grown<prasent perfect>"

3. Before "graduate" there should be a "be verb"

 

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

My native language is Chinese, and I grew up in China.
I am learning English because I want to go sightseeing abroad someday when I graduate.

 

That was nearly-perfect. Keep it up!

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