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My profile -Please correct it for me!!- I was born in Hiroshima Japan in 1979, and I am a Nature Photographer based in Shimane area Japan. After I graduated Shimane University, I'd been researching the environment of brackish water at "Japan Corbicula Research Institute" for 5 years. And my main fields were lake Shinji and lake Nakaumi which are Ramsar sites. Especially I was interested in fish and taking some specimen photographs. I provided many of my photographs to some guide books. "Fishes of Lake Shinji and Nakaumi" published by "Japan Corbicula Research Institute" is one of my best works. Then I moved to Toronto Canada in 2009 and stayed for 1 year and half. And I worked at a photo studio and used to take some portrait there. Every each holiday, I used to go taking beautiful North American nature photos while I was in Toronto. Every single creature, spectacular landscapes, I really fell in love with it. Now I came back to Shimane and I am taking photos of the Nature of Japan mainly.

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My profile -Please correct it for me!!-

I was born in Hiroshima, Japan in 1979, and I am a nature photographer based in the Shimane area of Japan. 
By the time I graduated from Shimane University, I'd been researching the environment of brackish water at Japan Corbicula Research Institute for 5 years. My main fields (I want to clarify here what is meant by fields: physical places or areas of study? It might be more appropriate to say either "The main areas I researched" or "The main sites I researched") were the Ramsar sites Lake Shinji and Lake Nakaumi.  I was especially interested in fish and photographing specimens.
I provided many of my photographs to guide books. "Fish of Lake Shinji and Nakaumi" published by Japan Corbicula Research Institute is one of my best works.  I moved to Toronto, Canada in 2009 where I stayed for a year and a half. I worked at a photo studio there and took portraits. On my holidays, I would photograph the beautiful nature of North America. 
I really fell in love with it, every single creature, every spectacular landscape. 
Now I am back in Shimane and I am mainly photographing nature in Japan.

 

~ Any questions let me know! :) It was well written, just some small punctuation things and order of words/sentences.

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Thank you Gray. As you point out, I was misunderstanding how to use "I have been... / I had been..." Yes I can teach you about photograph. But it's very maniac fish specimen photos. :P
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may i just add, am totally interested in your photographs. i love photography myself although i cant really take good photos. i'll be lucky if you don't mind befriending me, coz then i can learn both Japanese and photography. :p
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correcting makes me sound arrogant! i'll just leave a comment on your entry (hoping you'd teach me Japanese in return..) please don't mind me editing some of your sentences' flow. I was born in Hiroshima Japan in 1979. I am a Nature Photographer based in Shimane area of Japan. After I'd graduated from the Shimane University, I've been researching the brackish water environment at "Japan Corbicula Research Institute" for 5 years >>>assuming its been 5 years and you're still doing this<<. My main fields consist of Ramsar sites namely; lake Shinji and lake Nakaumi. I am interested in fish and taking some specimen photographs to provide guide books such as; "Fishes of Lake Shinji and Nakaumi". It was published by Japan Corbicula Research Institute and is just one of my best works. In 2009, I moved to Toronto Canada and stayed for a year and a half working at a photo studio taking portraits. Every single holiday, I used it to capture every living creature, every spectacular landscapes of the beautiful North American nature. Now I am back taking photos of the nature in Shimane, Japan.

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