Holiday
We will have a 7-day holiday for our National Day holiday which start from October 1st .Plus Mid-Autumn Day, a traditional festival for family reunion which is on 15th day of the eighth lunar month , that is September 30, we’ll total have 8 days for holiday, such a long time that it almost reaches the length of Chinese new year holiday.
How to spend the long holiday is a question. Because China has the largest population in the world, there are so many peoples who go to tourism cities for travelling or go home for a rest everywhere. It will lead the heavy traffic burden and inconvenience for us , such as we have to wait for a long time to buy train tickets, even worse the ticket what we want to buy has been sold out .
So I decide to go back to my hometown where it cost about 2.5hours by bus from Shanghai , spending time with my family. The last time I went home is May 1st. I haven’t seen them for 5 months. I miss them so much.
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Holiday
We will have seven days of holiday for our National Day holiday which start from October 1st, plus Mid-Autumn Day, a traditional festival for family reunion which is on the 15th day of the eighth lunar month , that is September 30th, in total we will have 8 days for holiday, such a long time that it almost reaches the length of Chinese new year holiday.
How to spend the long holiday is a question. Because China has the largest population in the world, there are so many people who go to tourism cities for travelling or go home for a rest everywhere. It will lead to a heavy traffic burden and inconvenience for us all , such as, we have to wait for a long time to buy train tickets, even worse the ticket that we want to buy has been sold out .
So I decide to go back to my hometown where it takes about 2.5hours by bus from Shanghai , spending time with my family. The last time I went home is May 1st. I haven’t seen them for 5 months. I miss them so much.
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It's really great to hear that. Is it the official holiday?
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I think your English is very good , I also like how you use your words so I have not gone heavy on corrections as your wording could be your character :)
I am also looking forward to this great Chinese holiday, Friday i will be catching a plane to Beijing to meet up with my fiancée, where we will visit the great wall then travel down to Shanghai to see some more of the site there, this will be my forth trip to China.
From Shanghai we will travel to Hangzhou to walk around west lake and see some friends, then we will travel to her home town for the rest of my trip.
Hope you have a great time with your family. :)
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