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xiaoxi's notebook entry: Sep 06, 2010 I'm planning for a trip,destination is Sanya.I miss the blue,clear sea because I haven't swum for many years .Every year tourists rush into No.1 bathing beach,like cooking dumplings!

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Hello Xiaoxi, 1] the clear, blue sea (Adjective order). 2] I haven't swum for many years (this looks good - have(n't)+past participle). 3] Tourists rush onto the No.1 beach. (They stand/play/lay/sunbathe on the beach, not in it). They can rush into the sea to get cool. 4] What likes cooking dumplings? All the best, Lee.
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Hello Xiaoxi, the clear, blue sea (Adjective order). I haven't swum for many years (this looks good - have(n't)+past participle). Tourists rush onto the No.1 beach. (They stand/play/lay/sunbathe on the beach, not in it). they can rush into the sea to get cool. What likes cooking dumplings? All the best, Lee.
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xiaoxi's notebook entry: Sep 06, 2010

I'm planning for a trip,destination is to Sanya.I miss the blue,clear clear blue sea because I haven't gone swimming in swum for many years .Every year tourists rush into No.1 bathing beach,like cooking dumplings!

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