First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, everybody, I am Flavia. It's my honor to meet you guys. Fuzhou, China is my hometown, have you ever been to China before? It's a large country, full of people and beautiful views. Once I have been to Italy on one occasion for to studying Italian, and have traveled to many other countries in Europe. I have to admit that Europe is so amazing. If I can get a chance, I'd like to travel around the world. Would you treat show me around when I arrive in your hometown? LOL

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Hi Flavia. I've never been to China but would love to go! There's such a diverse range of landscapes and cultures though, I think I'd have trouble deciding which parts to go to. Not sure how likely it is you'd come to where I live, but I'd happily meet up with you!

Hometown (note the spelling) is used for towns and cities, not countries. So you'd have to say Fuzhou or Beijing or Shanghai etc is your hometown, not China.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi, everybody, I am Flavia. It's my honor to meet you guys. China is my hometome, have you ever been to China before? It's a large country, full of people and beautiful views. Once I have been to Italy for studying italian, and traveled many other countries in Europe. I have to admit that Europe is so amazing. If I can get a chance, i'd like to travel around the world. Would you treat me when I arrivel your hometome? LOL

Nice introduction! A few comments in addition to the first correction:

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