A story from Tahrir square in Cairo
I was sitting on the ground in Tahrir square when i suddenly heard this voice, a strange voice that was coming from one side of the square, people started to worry, people started to shout "Over here everyone, some gangs are coming, they have knives, Molotov bombs and swords", I ran over there to see what is going on. I found this horrible scene.....
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A story from Tahrir square in Cairo
I was sitting on the ground in Tahrir square when I suddenly heard this voice, a strange voice that was coming from one side of the square. People started to worry and (some) started to shout "Over here everyone, some gangs are coming, they have knives, Molotov bombs and swords". I ran over there to see what was going on and I found this horrible scene: .....
To be continued.
Your correction will be highly apperciated.
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A story from Tahrir Square in Cairo
I was sitting on the ground in Tahrir Square when I suddenly heard this voice, a strange voice that was coming from one side of the Square. People started to worry people started to and shout, "Over here, everyone! Some gangs are coming. They have knives, Molotov bombs and swords." I ran over there to see what was going on. I found this horrible scene:
To be continued.
Your correction will be highly appreciated.
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forgot to add: appreciated.
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