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My weekend! Time flies! The short weekend will be over. On Friday evening, some of my friends and two of my students came to my home in order to taste my cooking skill. I cooked a Fish Filet in Hot chili oil and some vegetables. One of my students came late, but she took her boyfriend. When everyone was here, the dishes was a bit cold, bur it's nothing. After they tasted my fish and vegetables, they just said "I must come next time ,next next time". Yeah, my cooking skill is very good, I didn't brag, almost everyone tasted my food would say good. I think if some one likes delicious food, maybe they have genious for cooking, So am I. My friend said you could get married now, you are a eligible mother now, just kidding. In my opinions, cooking for the people who you love is very happy. When I see the satisfied expression on their faces, I feel satisfied too. I like cooking, like to cook for the people I love. No matter how, it's a good weekend. Looking forward to my long vacation. Good night.

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My weekend!

Time flies! The short weekend will be over. On Friday evening, some of my friends and two of my students came to my home in order to taste my cooking skill. I cooked a fish fillet in hot chilli oil and some vegetables. One of my students came late, but she brought her boyfriend. When everyone was here, the dishes were a bit cold, bur it didn't matter. After they tasted my fish and vegetables, they just said "I must come next time, next, next time". Yeah, my cooking skills is are very good, I didn't  don't brag, almost everyone who has tasted my food would say it was good. I think if someone likes delicious food, maybe they have a gift  for cooking, as I do. So am I. My friend said "You could get married now, You are a eligible mother now".  She was just kidding. In my opinion, cooking for the people who you love is very pleasing happy. When I see the satisfied expression on their faces, I feel satisfied too. I like cooking, like to cook especially for the people I love. No matter how what, it's a good weekend. Looking forward to my long vacation. Good night.

 

Notes: I have corrected some minor spelling errors.

I have turned your friends comment about marriage into a quote as that fits better as an English construction rather than as a sentence.

The next time, next, next time sentence I have left as a quote.

I have left yeah but you should use yes.

cooking skill has been changed to skills as that is normal usage. You would normally see "Yes I am a good cook"

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You can, so come to China!
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I WANT TAST YOUR PREPARTION FOOD.

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