hHello to this community! I'm here

I'm a gilrgirl born in Italy 29 years ago.

I'm graduated in economy economics (You can also write, "I graduated with a degree in economics")

and iI need to improve eEnglish for different reasons: first of all

(Just a punctuation note: Both a colon ":" and the phrase "first of all" introduce the next portion of the sentence, so you do not need both) iI need to be more fluent when iI speak because of my job, and also because iI like to learn new languages. 

I'm interested in art, drawing, economy, music, sports, travel...
I'm very curious and iI'd like to know more about other places in the world.
So if you'd like to learn the iItalian language and help me with my eEnglish, well iI'm here ready to start!

Great job! Only a few technical errors. :)

hello to this community ! I'm here

I'm a gilr born in Italy 29 years ago. I'm graduated in economy economics and i need to improve english for different reasons: first of all i need to be more fluent when i speak because of my job and also because i like to learn new languages.
I'm interested in art ,drawing , economy economics, music , sport, travel...
I'm very curious and i'd like to know more about other places in the world.
So if you'd like to learn italian language and help me with my english, well i'm here ready to start!