Search from various English teachers...
Japan flagToshi
Dog Walking ② In Japan, it is raining from two days before. I walked with him in rain this morning. His raincoat was worn. He walked along the usual route a little fast. We went home in about 30 minutes. His body was wiped with a towel. Walking will refresh him. His name is “Chousuke”. He is my little brother. Regards.

Corrections · 3

0

Dog Walking ②

In Japan, it has been raining for two days.
I walked with him in the rain this morning.
He wore his raincoat.
He walked along the usual route a little fast.
We went home after about 30 minutes.
I wiped his body with a towel.
Walking refreshed him.
His name is “Chousuke”.
He is my little brother.
Regards.

0

Dog Walking ②

In Japan, it is has been raining from for two days before.
I walked with him in the rain this morning.
His raincoat was worn. Correct technical use of the passive voice but it would not be used in this situation. He wore his raincoat.
He walked along the usual route a little fast.
We went home in after about 30 minutes.
His body was wiped with a towel. I wiped his body with a towel.
Walking will refresh him.  Walking refreshes him. ; Walking refreshed him. ; Walks refresh him. ; The walk refreshed him.
His name is “Chousuke”.
He is my little brother.
Regards.

 

Very cute story :D

Want to progress faster?

Join this learning community and try out free exercises!

Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!

Start Learning Today