Today was a nice day.

his morning at about ten o'clock. She said that there were no more classes today, and she would like to see me. After the call, I just drank a cup of coffee, and then I rode my electric bike to her school. There wasn't much traffic at that time, so I had reached her school gate in about 20 minutes. At the gate, I called to ask about where we could meet. She said, it would be most convenient for her that we meet at her dorm. So, I drove to her dorm and waited for her. She still wasn't there after ten minutes, so I took my book and read for awhile. She reached the dorm after a while where I was waiting for her. She was holding a box in her hand. As she got closer to me, I discovered it was just the card game called memory,  that we had played during the last time I was at her school. We just played the card game when she reached the table. While playing, we noticed that there were a lot of students going towards a little place behind the campus. I wasn't that astonished by this, because I knew the university can't let the students go outside for safety reasons during recent days. I was sure these students were finding a way to leave the campus without being caught by the teachers.  Nevertheless, I asked to know her opinion. She just smiled and said there would be an old grandmother helping the students to get out through a small gate, and everybody should give her 1 yuan. We continued playing the game and after half an hour, there was a guardian who had reached the place near where we were playing. I caught a glimpse of him talking to the outgoing students. From that moment there were no more students going out that way. Some time later, the game was finished and I was the one who lost. Then we took the electric bike and drove to the campus gate. Although the students can't leave the campus, the guardians are very friendly to the foreigners. So there was no problem for me to take her outside. We reached my home at about 2 o'clock.  She was watching TV while I was learning some Chengyu to improve my Chinese. She watches CCTV News every day, because Journalism is her major. After that, we went downstairs to buy some potatoes and noodles. We cooked some food, and then we went to sleep for a few hours. We got up during the evening and went outside to the promenade. We went back to the campus after the walk and found a nice place in the park near her dorm. We were sitting there for a while, then we went to sleep.

Today was a nice day.

I received a call from my girlfriend this morning at about ten o'clock. She said that there were no more classes today, and she would like to see me. After the call, I just drank a cup of coffee, and then I rode my electric bike to her school. There wasn't much traffic at that time, so I had reached her school gate in about 20 minutes. At the gate, I called to ask about where we could meet. She said, it would be most convenient for her that we meet at her dorm. So, I drove to her dorm and waited for her. She still wasn't there after ten minutes, so I took my book and read for awhile. She reached the dorm after a while where I was waiting for her. She was holding a box in her hand. As she got closer to me, I discovered it was just the card game called memory, that we had played during the last time I was at her school. We just played the card game when she reached the table. While playing, we noticed that there were a lot of students going towards a little place behind the campus. I wasn't that astonished by this, because I knew the university can't let the students go outside for safety reasons during recent days. I was sure these students were finding a way to leave the campus without being caught by the teachers. Nevertheless, I asked to know her opinion. She just smiled and said there would be an old grandmother helping the students to get out through a small gate, and everybody should give her 1 yuan. We continued playing the game and after half an hour, there was a guardian who had reached the place near where we were playing. I caught a glimpse of him talking to the outgoing students. From that moment there were no more students going out that way. Some time later, the game was finished and I was the one who lost. Then we took the electric bike and drove to the campus gate. Although the students can't leave the campus, the guardians are very friendly to the foreigners. So there was no problem for me to take her outside. We reached my home at about 2 o'clock. She was watching TV while I was learning some Chengyu to improve my Chinese. She watches CCTV News every day, because Journalism is her major. After that, we went downstairs to buy some potatoes and noodles. We cooked some food, and then we went to sleep for a few hours. We got up during the evening and went outside to the promenade. We went back to the campus after the walk and found a nice place in the park near her dorm. We were sitting there for a while, then we went to sleep.

today was a nice day

Today morning at about ten a clock o'clock I got a call from my girlfriend. She said there is was no more class today and she would like to see me. After the call I just drank a cup of coffee and then I took my electrical bike to go to her scool. At that time the traffic wasnt that much busy so about twenty minutes after I already reached her schoolgate. At the gate I gave her a call asking her where we could meet. She said meet at her hotel would be the most convenient to her. So I drived to her hotel (and) waiting her. After ten minutes she still wasnt there so I took my book reading for a while. Some while after she reached the hotel where I was waiting for her. In her hand she was holding a box in her hand. As she get closer to me I discovered it was just the cardgame called memory that we were playing the played last time when I was at her scool. As she reached the table we just played the cardgame. While playing we discovered that there were a lot of students going in direction of a little place behind the campus. I wasnt that astonished by this observation because i knew in the last days the university cant let the students go outside for safety reasons. So I was sure these students found a way to leave the campus without been traped by the teachers. Nevertheless I asked her to know her opinion. She just smilled and said there would be an old grandmother helping the students to get out through a small gate. Every person should give her 1 yuan. We continued playing the game and after half an our there reached a guardian near to the place we were playing. I caught a sight that he was talking to the outgoing students. From that moment there were no more students going out that way. Some time later the game was finished and I was the one who loosed lost. Then we took the electrical bike and drived to the campusgate. ActuallyThough the students cant leave the campus, but the guardians are very friendly to the foreigners. So there was no problem for me to take her outside. About 2 a clock o'clock we reached my home. At home she was looking watched TV while me I was learning some chengyu to improve my Chinese. Every day she is looking watches the CCTV News because News is here her major. After that we goed went down the stairs downstairs to buy some potatos and nudles noodles. We cooked some food and then we go   went to sleep for some hours. At the evening we got up and go outside to promenade. After the walk we were going back to the campus. There we found a nice place in the park nearby her hotel. We were siting there for a while then we go to sleep.

1.Due to I am not english native speaker, I can only correct some grammar mistakes in the passage that I can find out but can hardly making the passage perfectly.

2.Is your girlfriend a student of that university? If so, then where she lives would be "student dormitory" or "residence halls" instead of "hotel".

3.After reading your writing I can't find out [what] makes today so nice. Was that meeting your girlfriend or getting to know how students tried to get out of the school or the leisure time you had?