Developing a Paragraph by Process
When it comes to the first day of the college school , that's really impressive . When getting up , I picked up my luggage and waited my uncle to pick me up . It was not until at noon that my uncle came to my house . After having a lunch and a rest , we began to our travel . It took us more than 9 hours to arrive at the school and it was totally dark . Then we found the gatekeeper to help us , what's worse , he said that you came here both early and late . So we walked into school by ourselves and we sat on the beach until dawn .
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haha, thank you .
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haha......it so interesting to read !! Where is your college locating?
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