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My homework I love to saunter or running in my free time, but one day (the last week) I thought in something, I felt a bit of fear inside me, a terrible question appeared in my mind, what append if I under a big accident or fracture. One day my best friend knocked on my door and she wanted that we go to running in the mountains and I thought, that is not a bad idea, it is a healthy habit for my life. We run for through wonderful flower meadows, but suddenly began to rain very hard and we going by a dangerous way, but we felt a stranger movement in the ground and my best friend fell on the down, quickly I run ran to her. She had her ankle fractured, I call a emergency number and they would helped to my friend. For the rain I catch a terrible tonsillitis but my best friend was so convalesced for her broken ankle, our healthy day was terrible and finished so bad, I want to heal me of my tonsillitis and that my friend recovering.

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My homework

I love (enjoy is more formal vs. love. Same thing though) to saunter (Saunter means to walk slowly without being in a hurry) and run in my free time. but One day (the last week) a terrible question appeared entered my mind, which filled me with a great deal of fear and hesitation (means you're unsure of yourself) ; what would happen if I ended up getting injured or fracturing a bone in a big (huge) accident?

 

One day, my best friend knocked on the door. She asked me if I wanted go running with her in the mountains. Not a bad idea, I thought. It would be a healthy habit to get into and apply to my life.


We ran through beautiful meadows that were filled with flowers. As we were running, it suddenly began to rain extremely hard. Even though, we were running through a dangerous area, we both felt a strange urge to keep moving. and As we continued to run, my best friend fell down and I quicky ran to help her. She had her  fractured her ankle. I called an emergency number and explained to them what had happened to my friend. They told me that they would help her.


I ended up cathing tonsillitis, because of the rain; while my best friend recovered  from her broken ankle. Overall, our healthy day turned out terribly. I want to be cured of my tonsillitis, but I also hope that my friend recovers.

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only accident,please donn't worry!Everything will be all right soon!

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