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Will Phones Kill Letter Writing? Phone has to be an important part of life in modern society.But I don't think phones will kill letter writing. First of all,some people have especial emotion with hand-writing letter.They think words that write on paper are more rich in feelings than listen by phone.Hand-writing letter has unique status in people's mind.second ,hand-writing letter can be saved longer than phone.Paper can be saved as a memento.When you miss it,you can read it again and again.But phone message can't be saved,even though you can record,but you may delete it someday. In summary, even phone is very popular,we write letter less and less,that is because people is very busy nowaday,phone can help us save time.But when we back to peace,we will want to write letter to family and friend.Phone cannot take the place of letters.

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Will Phones Kill Letter Writing?

The Phone has to be an important part of life in modern society.But I don't think phones will kill letter writing.
First of all,some people have especial emotion special emotions with hand-written letters.They think words that write are written on paper are more rich in feelings than listening by phone.Hand-writing letter hand written letters have a has unique status in people's mind.second ,hand-writing letter can be saved longer than phone.Paper can be saved as a memento.When you miss it,you can read it again and again.But phone message can't be saved,even though you can record,but you may delete it someday.
In summary, even thoughphone is very popular,we write letter less and less,that is because people is very busy nowaday,phone can help us save time.But when we back to peace,we will want to write letter to family and friend.Phone cannot take the place of letters.

(Very beautiful. Keep up the good worK! There are some issues with the "prsent-tense" and "past-tense," brush up on those!) 

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I agree, you can't find the magic which is in the writing in the phone.

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