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wǒ jièshào yīxià Zǎoshang hǎo, wǒ xiǎng jièshào yīxià zìjǐ, wǒ de míngchēng shì chimier de. Wǒ jīnnián 32 suì, wǒ jiéhūn 4 nián yǐlái. Wǒmen yǒu yīgè 2 suì de érzi. Wǒ hé wǒ de qīzi gōngzuò lìshì dà gē bù jiǔdiàn. Měi yītiān, wǒ huì zài zǎoshang liù diǎn zhōng xǐng lái, qù cèsuǒ, línyù, ràng wǒ de yīfú, ránhòu chī zǎofàn, túchū bùfèn, zài líkāi zhīqián, wǒ huì wěn wǒ de érzi hé wǒ de qīzi. Wǒ tèbié bù xiāngxìn shén, dàn wǒ xiāngxìn, wǒ yǒu yīgè yùxiān xiě hǎo de lìshǐ, wǒmen měi gèrén zài dìqiú shàng, zhè yìwèizhe, měi onee zǒng shì yǒu yīxiē zuò yīgè wèilái de mìngyùn, huò kuàyuè yīgè “ De shēnghuó. Zài guòqù de jǐ gè yuè lǐ, wǒmen jīnglì yīxiē kùnnán de shíkè, wǒ hé wǒ de qīzi, wǒ juéde jiānchí hé yāsuō. , Dàn xiànzài wǒ huāle yīduàn jùlí, sīkǎo tā, wǒ kàn dào, tā shì róngyì dédào de dōngxi.

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wǒ jièshào yīxià (ziji or ziwo jieshao)

Zǎoshang hǎo, wǒ xiǎng jièshào yīxià zìjǐ, wǒ de  míngchēng (mingzi)shì chimier de. Wǒ jīnnián 32 suì, wǒ jiéhūn 4 nián yǐlái  le. Wǒmen yǒu yīgè 2 suì de érzi. Wǒ hé wǒ de qīzi gōngzuò zai lìshì dà gē bù jiǔdiàn.
Měi yītiān, wǒ huì zài zǎoshang liù diǎn zhōng xǐng lái, qù cèsuǒ, línyù, ràng (huanhao) wǒ de yīfú, ránhòu chī zǎofàn, túchū bùfèn (i do not understand what you mean here), zài líkāi zhīqián, wǒ huì wěn wǒ de érzi hé wǒ de qīzi.
Wǒ tèbié bù xiāngxìn shén, dàn wǒ xiāngxìn, wǒ yǒu yīgè yùxiān xiě hǎo de lìshǐ, wǒmen měi gèrén zài dìqiú shàng, zhè yìwèizhe, měi onee (yi ge ren) zǒng shì yǒu yīxiē zuò yīgè wèilái de mìngyùn(you ziji de mingyun) , huò kuàyuè (kuai le) yīgè “ De shēnghuó. 
Zài guòqù de jǐ gè yuè lǐ, wǒmen jīnglì yīxiē kùnnán de shíkè, wǒ hé wǒ de qīzi, wǒ juéde jiānchí hé yāsuō (what you mean here?). , Dàn xiànzài wǒ huāle yīduàn  jùlí (shijian) , sīkǎo tā, wǒ kàn dào, tā shì róngyì dédào de dōngxi.

 

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