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Speaking of autumn food… It has been hot yet. But I think it is getting cool in the morning. Speaking of autumn food,we have sauries. I bought two sauries yesterday. It was 98yen a each. I broiled the sauries, attached grated radish and poured soy sauce. It was good! My little son also ate a lot :-) I hope it become a little cooler.

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Speaking of autumn food…

It has been hot (yet.) but I think it is getting cool in the mornings. Speaking of autumn food, we have sauries. I bought two sauries yesterday. (It was) They were 98 yen a each. I broiled the sauries, (attached)added grated radish, and poured soy sauce on top. It was good! My little son (also) ate a lot. :-)
I hope it will become a little cooler.

 

Alternatively, for "I bought two sauries yesterday. (It was) They were 98 yen a each." You could say "I bought two sauries yesterday for 98 yen each."

 

This is my first correction, any input and/or tips for corrections by anyone else is greatly appreciated.

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