Studying (I think this sounds more proper in context) English

Sincerely (You don't need to use both 'sincerely' and 'to be honest', and 'sincerely' doesn't sound natural in this case) To be honest I have always been interested in learning English, since I was just a child.

Nowadays is more a necessity than an interest due to the high English skills you must have to get the opportunity to enter the employment market. Without having good English abilities, the possibilities to of finding a good job are quite low.

That's because the world where we are living now is not the same as it was a few years ago since the globalization made all the countries work together to carry out sales, transactions, agreements… so a common language is needed and that language is English.

As I mentioned above, the reason why I want to learn English due to it is being necessary to find a job and stand out from the rest, or at least not to stay below the average.

Leaving aside the employment interests, English is a language that, how as I said before, I have always loved and staying one year in England will allow me to improve my English abilities.

So I hope to reach the aim my goal of improving my English skills.

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Studying English

Sincerely, to be honest I have always been interested in learning English since I was just a child.

Nowadays it is more (of)("of" is optional) a necessity than an interest due to the high English skills you must have to get the opportunity to enter the employment market. Without having good English skills abilities, the possibilities to of finding a good job are quite low.

That´s because the world where we are living now is not the same as it was a few years ago since the globalization made all the countries work together to carry out sales, transactions, agreements… so a common language is needed and that language is English.

I mentioned above the reason why I want to learn English due to its is necessary necessity to in finding a job and standing out from the rest, or at least not to stay be below the average.

Leaving aside the employment interests, English is a language that how as I said before I have always loved and staying one year in England will allow me to improve my English abilities.

So I hope to reach the aim  goal of improving my English skills.