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Spring Festival At the end of each year , there is a strong festive atmosphere.Whenn wester are enjoying the Christmas and New Year holidays,we Chinee are building up for Spring Festival. It is a busy ,merry time . The twelfth month of the lunar calendar is called Layue .And Laba Festival, on the 8th day of the month,is regarded as the prelude to Spring Festival. Laba porridge is traditionally the main dish on this day. Meat and garlic are also pickled for eating during the holiday. From the begining of Laba Festival pelople clean their house and put up papercuts and couplets in windows. Another major celebration before Spring Festival fall on the offered to the kitchen god,a good sent from heaven to each family to take charge of family's affairs. The kitchen god is supposed to return to heaven to give a report to the Jade Emperor,who is the ruler of heaven in chinese mythology,about the family's activities over the past egear.On th eday ,people offerhim tasty dishes to encourage him to give a favorable report,thus securing the family good luck throughout the next next year.Sweet foods and honey are popular choices , as it is believed they seal the mouth of the kitchen god and him from saying bad things.

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Spring Festival

At the end of each year , there is a strong festive atmosphere.Whenn When wester are enjoying the Christmas and New Year holidays,we Chinee  Chinese  are building up for Spring Festival. It is a busy ,merry time .
The twelfth month of the lunar calendar is called Layue .And Laba Festival, on the 8th day of the month,is regarded as the prelude to Spring Festival.
Laba porridge is traditionally the main dish on this day. Meat and garlic are also pickled for eating during the holiday.
From the begining of Laba Festival pelople clean their house and put up papercuts and couplets in windows. Another major celebration before Spring Festival fall on the offered to the kitchen god,a good sent from heaven to each family to take charge of family's affairs.
The kitchen god is supposed to return to heaven to give a report to the Jade Emperor,who is the ruler of heaven in chinese mythology,about the family's activities over the past egear.On th eday ,people offerhim tasty dishes to encourage him to give a favorable report,thus securing the family good luck throughout the next next year.Sweet foods and honey are popular choices , as it is believed they seal the mouth of the kitchen god and him from saying bad things.
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Spring Festival

At the end of each year , there is a strong festive atmosphere. When the West is enjoying the Christmas and New Year holidays, we Chinese are building up for Spring Festival. It is a busy ,merry time.
The twelfth month of the lunar calendar is called Layue. Laba Festival, on the 8th day of the month, is regarded as the prelude to Spring Festival.
Laba porridge is the traditional main dish eaten on this day. Meat and garlic are also pickled for eating during the holiday.
From the beginning of Laba Festival people clean their house and put up paper cuttings and couplets in windows. Another major celebration before Spring Festival fall on the offered to the kitchen god,a good sent from heaven to each family to take charge of family's affairs. (I am not sure what your are trying to say here. perhaps you can try to simplify and break up into two separate sentences)

The kitchen god is supposed to return to heaven to give a report to the Jade Emperor, who is the ruler of heaven in chinese mythology, about the family's activities over the past year. On the day, people offer him tasty dishes to encourage him to give a favorable report thereby securing the family good luck throughout the next next year. Sweet foods and honey are popular choices, as it is believed they seal the mouth of the kitchen god and keep him from saying bad things.

 - A well thought out notebook entry, keep up the good work

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