My Dog's Fear

I have a lovely dog. The friendship between this eight year old lab and I is comfortablemon and friendly. {comfortable is often used to describe close relationships where the two beings know each other well and are very used to being together}

He is always loyal to me. When I come home, he wags his the tail and barks loudly to welcome me to return home. However, here is also a secret involving my dog. He is scared of the rain with strong thunder. He will shiver with fear, and will find someone who can protect him.

Yesterday, in Saigon, it rained all day along with much thunder. While I was working in my room, my nephew brought him into my room. Next Right away the lab ran beside me, and nuzzled me as if he wanted to seek my protection. Looking at the dog, I felt that I adore him so much. Then I hugged him. He looked like a baby.

A dog has many super powers, as well as his friendly signs of affection that make us feel good. That's why he is very close to humans. {In many English speaking countries the phrase "a dog is man's best friend" is used. Because it is an old saying, the term "man" is used to mean "human"}

My Dog's Fear

I have a lovely eight year old dog. Our companionship is strong.

He has always been loyal to me. When I come home, his tail wags, and he barks joyfully at my return. However, there is a thing with my dog. He's scared of thunder. He will shiver with fear, and find someone who can protect him.

Yesterday, it stormed all day here in Saigon (HCMC, Vietnam). The storms made a lot of thunder. I was working in my room when my nephew brought him in. He scuttled to cringe beside me, and kept nuzzling me for further protection. He looked adorable. I hugged him. He's such a baby!

Dogs' have many extra abilities, including signs of affection that make us feel good. That's why he is very good companion for this human!

(I used some 'licence' with your story to add (roughly) the vocabulary you seem to be after).