First notebook entry: Introducing myself
hello ,everyone
I am your new friend. MyEnglish name is cathy, I was 22 years old this year, and here I hope you'll find joy in learning English, share a sweet fruit as well as the joy of victory, and want you to be my best friend!That's all ! Thanks!
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Very good, Cathy. Like Kawaii said, use "am" for something about you at present, and "was" for something about you that occurred the past. The rest of the corrections are for proper grammar and punctuation.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello, everyone
I am your new friend. My English name is Cathy, I am 22 years old this year, and here I hope you'll find joy in learning English, share a sweet fruit as well as the joy of victory, and want you to be my best friend! That's all! Thanks!
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I was 22 years old this year -> I am 22 years old this year
Because "was" is something past and right now you are still 22 years old. Another way to say it using a past tense word would be "I turned 22 years old this year"
Your sentence is quite long. You might want to make it into several sentances...
I am your new friend. My English name is cathy, I am 22 years old this year, and here I hope you'll find joy in learning English. (start new sentance here) We can share a sweet fruit as well as the joy of victory. (start new sentance here) I want you to be my best friend! That's all! Thanks!
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