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I want to talk about what happened with me yesterday Hello everyone! Call me Joik, and I have 19 years old. Last night, I ended my relationship with my girlfriend. And I'm very sad because I love her, and it hurts so much to see and spend the day she is not with me, talking to me, looking at me. It's sucks I know, and I still do not believe she's gone. This is the life, right?

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I want to talk about what happened with me yesterday

Hello everyone! Call me Joik, and I have 19 years old. Last night, I ended my relationship with my girlfriend. And I'm very sad because I love her, and it hurts so much to see and spend the day she is not with me, talking to me, looking at me. It's sucks I know, and I still do not believe she's gone.
This is the life, right?

 

I want to talk about what happened to me yesterday.

 

Hello everyone! Call me Joik, I am 19 years old. Last night, I ended my relationship with girlfriend. (You could also say "Last night I broke up with my girlfriend").

And I'm very sad because I love her, and it hurts so much not to see her. It hurts spending days without her, it hurts for her not to talk to me or to look at me.

It sucks I know, and I still do not believe that she's gone. (You could also say "and I still can't believe she's gone)

But this is life, right?

 

Nice Job, Joik. And I wish you all the best in this difficult period. Be strong!

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