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( French / english ) need you correction for reply to a job offer At the end there is the French text The management of information systems is a job i had practice a lot on which i am certified ITIL « itil foundation » ; at the beginning ,into the Company's outsourcing center, where i was in charge of incidents management for a parc of server , then during 4 years , where I was guarantor of good-running of 500 desktops into 3 different countries : France, Spanish and UK. In quality of Technical project manager for "a company" I was in charge the team animation of 4 people. My mission consisted to organize, plan and coordinate the activities to ensure compliance with the commitments . Finaly , English is a competency i work quite all the days by reading, wathing movies and speaking with English-speaker on weekly basis. I know very well what are the problems of IT systems and how to manage it . Security, change management or deployment are no more a mystery but really well-known skills. I am very interested by your offer for an “Ingénieur de Production (Coordinateur Desktop)” . I hope we can discuss together about this work opportunity . Thanking you in advance to examine my aplication . Regards, Le gestion des systèmes /informatique est un métier que j'ai souvent pratiqué sur lequel je suis certifié "itil foundation"; tout d'abord dans le centre d'infogérance d"Entreprise" où j'avais en charge la gestion des incidents pour un parc de serveurs ensuite , pendant 4 ans, où j'étais garant du bon fonctionnement d'un parc de 500 stations de travail réparties sur trois pays : la France, l'Espagne et l'Angleterre. Je connais donc bien les problématiques et les enjeux de ce type d'infrastructure, comme la sécurité, la gestion des changements ou encore la gestion des mises en production. En qualité de chef de projet technique pour "entreprise", j'avais en charge l'animation d'une équipe de 4 personnes. Ma mission consistait à organiser, planifier et coordonner l'activité afin de garantir le respect des engagements pris. Enfin, l'anglais est un compétence que je travaille au quotidien : lecture de livre , visualisation de film en version original, conversation avec des anglophones de manière hebdomadaire.

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I have had a great deal of experience in the management of information systems. I am certified ITIL « itil foundation ». I was first employed at  "Company's" outsourcing center, where i was in charge of incident management for a bank of servers. I have four years subsequent experience overseeing the proper functioning of 500 desktops into 3 different countries : France, Spain and UK. 
 
While working in the role of Technical project manager for "company" I was in charge of leading a team of four people. My mission consisted of organizing, planing and coordinating the activities to ensure compliance with commitments.

Finaly, English is a competence i work on daily by reading and wathing movies. I communicate with an English-speaker on weekly basis.

I am very experienced in the identification and management of IT system problems. Security, change management or deployment are tasks I can perform with a very high degree of competence.  
 
I am very interested by your offer for an “Ingénieur de Production (Coordinateur Desktop)” . I hope we can discuss this work opportunity together. 
 
Many thanks in advance for taking the time to examine my application .

Regards, 

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