My first essay

Hello! Everyone!
I am a Chinese student and learning in a middle school in China. I like learning English. But my English is not good.
I like listening to music in my free time. I like Justin Bieber very much. I like traveling, too. But I never have a traveling. I think that's a shame. The next year, I will have a chance to travel with my classmate. We will go there by bike. I think this will be a very rewarding experience. I know we will meet have some troubles, but I don't am not afraid!
I hated italki a while ago. But now, I don't hate it.
After this night tonight, I will go to school. Today is Teachers' Day. But we are staying at home. I didn't say "Happy holidays" to my teachers. I don't know their mobile phone numbers. The new term will begin. I hope I can study hard and forget all the unhappy things.

My first essay

Hello! Everyone! 
I am a Chinese student and learning in a middle school in China. I like learning English. But my English is not good. 
I like listening to music in my free time. I like Justin Bieber very much. I like traveling, too. But I have never had a traveling. I think that's a shame. The next year, I will have a chance to travel with my classmate. We will go there by bike. I think this will be a very rewarding experience. I know we will meet some troubles, but I don't afraid! 
I hated italki ago. But now, I don't hate it. 
After this night, I will go to school. Today is Teachers' Day. But we are staying at home. I didn't say "Happy holidays" to my teachers. I don't know their mobile phone number. The new term will begin. I hope I can study hard and forget all the unhappy things.

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