First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning the English language because it's very needed to for my work. And also I also want to be have friends who speaking English language or want to learning with me. I want to be a good translator. My native language is Mongolian (deleted period) and I(capitalize; 'I' is always capitalized regardless of position) grew up in Ulaanbaatar, the capital of Mongolia. I enjoy traveling and reading a books.

Great job!

One key point is: in english, starting a sentance with "and" isn't allowed.

You're off to a great start :)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I am learning the English language because it's very needed in my work. And also I want to be friends with people who speaking the English language or want to learning (it) with me. I want to be a good translator. My native language is Mongolian. And I grew up in Ulaanbaatar, the capital of Mongolia. I enjoy traveling and reading books.

Very interesting that you are from Mongolia! I've never met anyone from there before. I hope you have a good time learning English.