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My Mr right I always dream that how my boyfriend is.He looks very sunny and should be strong.When I am in danger,he can protect me.His height to more than 175.Because I like tall man.He should be thoughtful.When I am sick,he is concerned about me and can look after me.He is a businessman better.Because I grew up in a business family.In China,there is a sentence"门当户对”.I think it's rihgt.But he doesn't need to have a lot of money.After all,happiness is the most importent.When I am tired and sad,he can make me happy.That's enough.He will be a dependable people for me. Where's my Mr right?I don't know.I think we are both on our way to look for each other.

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I always dream about my boyfriend. He looks very sunny and he is strong. When I am in danger, he protects me. He is taller than 175 cm, because I like tall men. He is thoughtful. When I am sick, he is concerned and looks after me. He is a good businessman, which is important because I grew up in a business family. In China, there is a phrase, "门当户对". I think it's true. But he doesn't need to have a lot of money. After all, happiness is the most important part. When I am tired and sad, he can make me happy, that's enough. He is dependable.

Where's my Mr. Right? I don't know. I think we are both looking for each other/on our way to find each other.

 

* I'm sorry for omitting to mark where the corrections were. There are parts where it would be helpful to understand a little deeper what it was you wanted to say, because it could be understood in different ways. To be honest, I wasn't entirely sure how to correct this. There are minor mistakes, but it was well composed. If you read something in my correction that isn't what you meant, please let me know!

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