The Holiday

This was the greatest vacation I have ever had. I went to Marmaris - Muğla. I had a great time with my family, especially with my brother :), because he's like a friend to me and I spend my time with him. We got around all of the coves by a boat tour. We swam and jumped from the ship's second deck :)) All I can say is that the Mediterranean Sea is awesome! You can see all sorts of fish under your feet while you're swimming. and Then... we went to Saklıkent and saw the Canyon! [*jealous*] We passed by the stream. The current was taking us away but we survived haha :)) Andd... We had a banana tour! We fell down to the sea haha .. In the end.. We had a picnic, and also a barbecue party! My brother and I smoked hookah, then we went to the pier and met a man there who was fishing :)) He was very kind to talk with. He has gone to almost every European country :)) After this beautiful conversation, we went home back. Now this great vacation is almost over :( I'm going to miss it here. I hope I can come again!

-You wouldn't say "my family and also my brother", because he is a part of your family.

-Don't use 'cause in writing, 'cause it's, like, slang. And don't start a sentence with "and". :)

-Boats have decks, not floors. It's a nautical term

-What is a banana tour???

The Holiday

This was the greatest vacation I have ever been through... I went to Marmaris - Muğla. I had a great time with my family and also with my brother :) 'Cause he's like a friend to me and I spend my time with him. We got around all coves by a boat tour. We swam and jumped from the ship's second floor :) I can only say that the Mediterranean sea is awesome! You can see many fish under your feet while you're swimming. Then, we went to Saklıkent and saw the Canyon! We passed by the stream. The current was taking us away but we survived, haha :) And, we (also) had a banana tour! We fell down to the sea, haha.. Finally, we had a picnic and also a barbecue party! My brother and I smoked hookah. Then we went to pier and met a man there who was fishing :) He was very kind to talk with. He has been to almost all europe countries :) after this beutiful conversation, we went back home. And this great vacation is over; almost :( I'm going to miss being here. I hope I can come again!