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9/11 Day As the day is approaching, I would like to write about a memorable event in the history of America. It is a tragic event that not only the Americans will always remember but all the people in the world. The Americans will never forget the atrocities committed and the many lives lost that day. What happened in the United States of America on September 11 is against all human and Islamic norms. I would like to say that Muslims who live according to the human values of Islam do not commit such horrible crimes and senseless slaughters of thousands of people. I would like also to say that Muslims and Islam should not be held responsible for such inhuman actions: for those who committed the incidents are barbaric, depraved and atrocious. Their total ignorance and extreme brutality is what led them to kill and destroy. The Quran teaches forgiveness and restraint, and warns believers not to "transgress" or become "oppressors." It repeatedly urges moral principles and human values such as forgiveness, mercy, self-control, kindness, etc. Goodness and evil are not equal. Repel evil with what is better. Then that person with whom there was hatred, may become your intimate friend! And no one will be granted such goodness except those who exercise patience and self-restraint, none but people of the greatest good fortune. Quran 41:34-35

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Very well written, both the content and the language. I hope this post doesn't become a flame fest like some other recent threads. (The only correction I would make is to drop the final -s from "slaughters").
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enty 5air mesal lel banat el muslima eli agd3 mn shabab kteer . yarab ykrmk we tfdly mesal gaid lel islam keda 3alatol .

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