First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I like English very much. I want to speak English well, so I try to practise it every day. I wish to make foreign friends and travell around the world.
I'm from Vinh city, Nghe An, Viet Nam. My hobbies are surfing the Internet, travelling, business, shopping, cooking, singing songs and writing poems.
Nice to meet everybody!!

Good and interesting introduction, perfectly understandable as you wrote it, but with a few small errors. Good !!

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I like English so much. I want to speak English well. So, I try to pratice it everyday...._I want to make foreign friends and travell around the world. 
I'm from Nghe An, Vinh city, Viet Nam. My hobbies are surfing the Internet, travelling, business (?), shopping, cooking, singing songs, and making poems....
Nice to meet everybody!!

What specifically do you like about 'business'? Write more! :)

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I like English so much. I want to speak English well, so I try to pratice it everyday....I want to make foreign friends and travell around the world.
I"m from Nghe An, Vinh city, Viet Nam. My hobby is are surfting the Internet, travelling, business, shopping, cooking, singing songs and do writing poems....
Nice to meet everybody!!